IELTS Writing Task 1 | People with mobile phones (1 Table)

This table provides data regarding the percentage of the people’s usage of the several features of the mobile phone in 2006, 2008 and 2010 respectively. It clearly shows that they mainly used mobile phones to make calls, send and receive text messages and taking photos in 2006 however there is no any major particular changes of using these features in 2010 also.According to the table there was no data available in 2006 to access the internet and to record videos however between 2008 to 2010 usage of these features increased significantly around two thirds. It is considered that playing games and music considerably increased from 2006, 2008 to 2010 respectively. Taking everything in to consideration there was no major changes of using main features of the mobile phones such as calls, messages and photos among the people from 2006 to 2010 and on the other hand additional features such as video record, access to internet, and playing games and music were increased considerably fro

Is using a conclusion in task 1 appropriate?

Is not the paraghraph should be written in past simple since the table about previous years?

The table provides information on how many poeple in percent used different mobile phone features from 2006 to 2010.It is clear that, most people used their mobile phones to make calls as well as messaging. All mobile phone users made calls between 2006 and2008 axcept for the 1% decrease in 2010%. The number of people who played music and took pictures using their cell phones increased along the years, where as, playing games decreased from 2008 to 2010 by 1%. Eventhough there was no data for 2006, video recording and searching internate gradually increased in the two years gap from 2008 to 2010 showing that the number of people recording video almost trippledOver all, the percent of people using different mobile features significantly increased in almost all cases.

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The table given is illustarting the different features available in mobile phones and their usage.The most interesting point is that there is a decline in people doing phone for calls and games.There is no data available for internet surfing and video recording in start.People using their phones for camera increases with 5% rising into peak in 2010.Text messages start to increase exponentialy from 2006 having a percentage of 79% in 2010.Playing games is increased from 2006 to 2008 but then ended up at 41% in 2010.Internet use and video recording increased significantly from 2008 to 2010 but have no previous data recorded in 2006.Playing music has a percentage of 12% in 2006 with rise of 26% in 2010.The largest increase in the usage of mobile phone feature obtain is in video recording.In total, there is an increase in the percentage of mobile phone feature in a given period of time with the exception of use of games and phone calls.

The table illustrates the changes in mobile phone feature usage over three-year period from 2006 to 2010.Overall, making calls remained the most popular function throughtout the period, while newer features like searching the internet and recording video saw the most dramatic growth.In 2006, making calls was universal at 100% staying nearly constant by 2010. During the same period, taking photos and messaging both showed steady growth, reaching 76% and 79% respectively.In contrast, while there was no data for internet use in 2006, it surged to 73% by 2010. Similarily, recording video rose from 9% in 2008 to 35% in 2010. indicating significant shift in how people utlized thier mobile devices.